My Favorite Spot in the Woods
What is my favorite place like?
My favorite place is a quiet, wooded area behind my house. The spot is surrounded by trees and has a wooden bench that my father built. When I go to my favorite spot, I can smell the sweet perfume of nearby pine trees. If it is a quiet day, I can hear chipmunks and squirrels scurrying through the leaves. A soft breeze often blows through the pines and swirls through my hair.
Which sentence BEST revises the description of how I feel in my favorite spot?
When I'm in my favorite spot, I feel very good.
To provide more descriptive detail, the best revision for the last sentence would be: "When I'm in my favorite spot, I feel calm and relaxed." This choice creates a sense of peace and tranquility, emphasizing the soothing atmosphere of the quiet, wooded area. The feeling of being calm and relaxed enhances the overall experience of being in this special place, allowing for a deeper connection with nature and a sense of inner peace.