The Mystery of the Mona Lisa Revealed
The wife of a silk merchant and the famous Mona Lisa
The wife of a silk merchant, the famous Mona Lisa is thought to be a portrait of Lisa Gherardini del Giocondo.
Which of the following is the most clear and concise way to write this sentence so the focus is on the Mona Lisa? If it is correct, mark "correct as is."
A. The wife of a silk merchant, Lisa Gherardini del Giocondo is thought to be the subject of the famous Mona Lisa.
B. The famous Mona Lisa is thought to depict Lisa Gherardini del Giocondo, the wife of a silk merchant.
C. correct as is
Which sentence is the most clear and concise way to write this so the focus is on the Mona Lisa? The correct answer is B. The famous Mona Lisa is thought to depict Lisa Gherardini del Giocondo, the wife of a silk merchant.Final answer:
Option B is the most clear and concise way to write the sentence so the focus is on the Mona Lisa.
Explanation:
The most clear and concise way to write this sentence so the focus is on the Mona Lisa is option B: The famous Mona Lisa is thought to depict Lisa Gherardini del Giocondo, the wife of a silk merchant. This option puts the emphasis on the Mona Lisa as the subject of the sentence and provides the necessary information about her identity and connection to Lisa Gherardini del Giocondo, the wife of a silk merchant.